๐๐This week in reading I had to create a beat around the story I was reading. This story it was about this girl who wanted to give a gift to her auntie and gave it to her. In the story there was a nice clean ocean and everybody was happy in the story and her is my mini beat.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, November 18, 2020
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Well done Ines, your beat/song sounds happy - I can hear the story coming through. What did you enjoy about reading this story?
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Hi Ines that is amazing. I like the way you told what the story was about.
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